“Seeing Beauty”, Ch. 20–Keith and Lily Make Love (R rated), 9/21/12 Gratiana Lovelace (Post #275)

“Seeing Beauty”, Ch. 20–Keith and Lily Make Love   (R rated), 9/21/12 Gratiana Lovelace (Post #275)

An Original Story Copyrighted by Gratiana Lovelace (All rights reserved)

[(1) “Seeing Beauty” story logo, left]

[I will illustrate my stories with my dream cast:  Richard Armitage as Keith Erickson, Mandy Moore as Lily Sherman, Matthew Perry as Brock, David Schwimmer as Jack, and Matt LeBlanc as Sam, and the late Jessica Tandy as Hazel, and Leelee Sobieski as Mercedes. etc.]

Author’s Mature Content Note:  “Seeing Beauty” is a nontraditional romantic love story set amidst contemporary times.  As such there will be some passages in this story involving heartfelt love scenes or other sauciness (R rated) and some passages involving highly dramatic moments.  I will label the maturity rating of those chapters accordingly.  Otherwise, the general rating for this story is PG or PG-13 due to mature situations and topics.  If you are unable or unwilling to attend a movie with the ratings that I provide, then please do not read those chapters.  This is my disclaimer.


Author’s Recap from the previous installment:   Keith and Lily at lunch at an upscale Italian restaurant on Sunday where they ran into Keith’s office assistant and her husband.  Then when they went to Keith’s apartment to pick up a few more clothes for him to have at the private rehab facility, Keith gave Lily a tour and then they cuddled on his bed.  Keith proposed to Lily–and after a bit of encouragement, she accepted him.  Both of them want to celebrate this new stage in their relationship.

 “Seeing Beauty”, Ch. 20–Keith and Lily Make Love  (R rated)

Keith and Lily continued to lie together cuddling fully clothed on his bed after becoming engaged.  Their kisses are sweetly tender, but becoming more passionate.   To celebrate their engagement–and because he loves her with his whole heart–Keith wants to make love with Lily, really make love with her.   They have been creative in their lovemaking up until now, but it has not involved the traditional joining of their bodies.  And Lily has been mostly clothed–though Keith was naked except for a condom the second time they made love creatively last night.  But Keith knows of Lily’s insecurities about her body that she shared with him–since she’s lost weight and she says that she has some sagging skin.  Being loved, making out, and making love are all so new to Lily.  Lily loves Keith and she believes that he loves her.  She is still just very shy about her body–and the intimacies that they have shared thus far–despite their two lovemaking interludes yesterday evening.

Still, Keith needs to feel his flesh against Lily’s flesh and he unbuttons his shirt and removes it from his torso.  Lily wondrously caresses Keith’s muscular shoulders, arms, and chest. Lily has never been with another man in this way–or any way, really–and her shy light caresses of him send frissions of delight tingling through she and Keith.  Lily kisses Keith’s chest and neck and lips.  Keith kisses Lily’s lips, and neck and the crevice between her breasts peeking out of her blouse.  Keith needs to kiss and caress Lily’s breasts as his loving ardor for her grows.  Keith starts to unbutton Lily’s blouse and she shyly and hesitantly covers his hand with her hands as she breathes deeply.  Keith looks into Lily’s eyes though the room is dark and he is still blind—but Lily can see Keith’s love for her in his eyes.

Lily now slowly and tremblingly unbuttons her blouse—and Keith helps her remove it–to reveal her full round breasts in their satin and lace bra and slip.   Though Keith cannot see the lace and satin, he can feel them as he kisses and caresses Lily there. Keith’s heart is aflame with love and lust for Lily as he buries his face in her full round breasts.  Then Keith reaches behind Lily’s back to find her bra’s hooks and he expertly undoes them.  The support the bra gives to Lily’s full round breasts gives way.  And Lily holds her hands in front of her breasts over her slip demurely–supporting her breasts as Keith slowly slides the bra straps down Lily’s arms.  Then, Keith kisses Lily again adoringly as he pulls her bra away and Lily’s full round breasts in their thinner satin and lace clip covering press against Keith’s bare chest.

Keith:  “Oh Lily, you are so beautiful my love!”   Keith says caressing Lily’s full round breasts lovingly.   “I love you so.”

Lily:  “Oh Keith, I love you so.”   Lily is glad that Keith’s bedroom is dark, because it helps her overcome her shyness and insecurities.

Keith:  “Lily, I want to make love with you with all of my heart.”  Keith kisses and caresses Lily tenderly, sweetly, eagerly and adoringly.

Lily:  Lily has never been touched by a man the way that Keith’s caresses  her and the way his heart’s love touches her.  Lily is shy–but she is also desirous–as Keith’s tender lovemaking envelopes her.  “Yes, Keith my love.  Make love with me.”

Now Keith eagerly removes his trousers and then Lily’s skirt.  Lily does indeed have an all body girdle on as she said she wore and Keith kisses her smoothed and flat abdomen through the soft and stretchy spandex fabric.  Keith stands up from the bed and helps Lily stand—she demurely covers her breasts  over her  slip with her arms–even though Keith’s blind eyes could not see the level of her arousal.  Then Keith pulls down the bed sheets and Lily sits back down and he covers her with the bed sheet.

Keith:  “Lily my love, I’m going into the bathroom to get us a condom.  I’ll be back in a few moments.   While I’m gone, you might want to remove your clothes–all of your clothes.”  Lily gasps and Keith pulls her into his embrace and whispers into her ear.   “If you want to put your slip back on, I’m sure that you’ll be lovely in it.

Keith hobbles on his crutches into the bathroom. Yes, he needs to get a condom.  But this also gives Lily time to remove her girdle and panties herself and then slide under the covers.  Lily is naked but for her satin and lace slip in Keith’s bed, waiting for her lover to return to her.  And he does return to her.  Keith turns off the bathroom light and he hobbles back into the bedroom wearing only a towel, a condom, and a smile as he walks toward Lily in his bed.  Lily is overcome with love and lust for Keith as he slides into bed with her and he removes his towel under the bed sheets.

Though they have made love twice already, they had done so creatively, fully clothed—without Keith body joining with Lily’s body.  But now, they will make love wholly and completely–unconstricted by clothing, well mostly.  But then Keith lifts Lily’s slip up her body–kissing her flat abdomen and then her beautiful breasts as they are revealed to him.  Keith wraps his arms around Lily and they intertwine their naked bodies and legs with each other.  Keith and Lily delight in feeling his skin against her skin as they intertwine their bodies sensuously.  Lily is lost within the heady sensation of the feel of Keith against her body–his taut muscular body and her soft and curvy body fit perfectly together.  Keith’s still healing leg will also mean that their truly traditional lovemaking will have to occur at the very end of their lovemaking since he cannot hold himself up for long on only his good leg.  But Keith kisses and caresses Lily’s lips and neck and shoulders and her full round breasts–exciting her and himself.

Lily’s soft womanly curves excite Keith and his arousal increases in his loving ardor for her.  Lily caresses Keith as her other arm embraces him as they kiss.  Keith now directly caresses Lily’s womanly center and she gasps at feeling the pleasures Keith gives her.  And Keith is a tender and considerate lover because he makes sure Lily that gets very aroused since this will be her first time making love—with full intercourse—to make it less painful for her.  Then, when Lily and Keith can no longer delay their bodies’ needs to be joined as one, Keith lays on top of Lily and they join their bodies together [(2) right].

Lily:  “Huhh!  Lily gasps with feeling Keith’s strength inside her.  And yes, for the initial pain of it as she gives him her virginity.  Tears fall down Lily’s cheeks for the love and tenderness she feels for and from Keith.

Keith:  “Oh Lily, my love!”   Keith cries out as he joins his body with Lily’s body again, and again, and again, and again as they each feel blissful raptures surge through their bodies, one to the other—pleasures stronger than yesterday when they made love with each other creatively, while they were still fully clothed.

Lily:  “Keith, I love you so!”
Again, and again, and again, and again, Keith and Lily kiss and caress each other adoringly, lustfully, and lovingly as their pleasures heighten.  Then Lily and Keith cling to each other as waves of pleasures of ecstasy engulf them.  Keith kisses Lily adoringly as they continue to embrace.  But Keith realizes that Lily is breathing shallowly because of his weight on her petite frame—since he is such a tall and muscular man.  So, Keith shifts himself to laying on his side next to Lily lying on her back–to relieve her from feeling his full muscular weight on her and Lily cuddles up next to him, now also laying on her side facing him.  They lay cuddling and kissing intertwined like this for some time—not wanting to move, not wanting to part their bodies from each other.

Lily feels whole and complete in Keith’s arms–her shyness making way for her love for Keith.  And Keith is experiencing a whole new dimension of being in a committed romantic relationship with Lily.  He finds that his


But eventually, Lily and Keith each rise to visit the bathroom.  Since the towel Keith brought with him caught the blood that was spilt in Lily giving him her virginity, she has nothing to cover herself with to walk into the bathroom.  Though she knows Keith is legally blind, she is still shy about showing herself to him–even with the intimacies they have shared together.  So, Lily improvises and holds a bed pillow in front of herself.  As Lily sits up on the edge of the bed, Keith runs his fingers down her bare back underneath her long flowing hair.  Lily arches her back and she looks demurely over her shoulders back at Keith.  Keith is smiling with his hand resting on Lily’s curvy womanly hips–and he makes a memory of the shape of her in his mind.  Then Lily stands and walks toward the bathroom with the pillow in front of her.

She closes the bathroom door and turns on its light.  Lily removes the pillow from in front of her and she looks at her naked body that just twenty minutes ago made love joyously with her Keith, and she smiles.  Because although their bedroom was dark, and yes Keith is blind, lovers see by feel–and Keith saw all of Lily as they made love.  Lily sighs with the memory of her lover’s touch.  Then she cleans her womb of its virgin blood and such before she returns to Keith in their bedroom.  As Lily walks back into the bedroom—with the pillow in front of her again—Keith is hobbling toward her on his crutches.  It is his turn in the bathroom.  As Keith reaches Lily, they kiss sweetly and tenderly.  Keith slowly tugs at the pillow Lily is holding in front of her until she releases it and they mold their naked bodies together while he tosses the pillow back onto the bed. Then, Keith smiles and he continues hobbling toward the bathroom as Lily walks toward the bed—with her arms demurely in front of and supporting and covering her full round breasts.  But Keith can’t resist turning back, and he gives Lily’s round backside a little squeeze and she gasps and smiles.

Keith now goes into the bathroom and freshens up.  He knows that he did indeed take Lily’s virginity because even blind, he can see the blood on the condom and on the towel.  Keith now leans in toward the mirror trying to see his face—the face of a man in love and who is loved.  Keith can make out some of his image, but it is still too blurry for him to recognize himself.  Yet, he still smiles.  So, before returning to Lily, Keith grabs a fresh towel and another condom—for later.  Then he hobbles back into their bedroom holding the condom package and the towel in each hand, but not in front of himself.  Lily sees Keith hobbling toward her on his crutches in all of his muscular handsome glorious nakedness and—as with yesterday when she saw him wrapped in only a towel for the first time—she almost raptures again.  Keith slides into bed next to Lily.

Keith:  “How do you feel now, Lily Darling.”   Keith asks her considerately with a big grin on his face, slipping a condom package under his pillow.

Lily:  “Loved.”  Lily sighs tenderly.  And she and Keith kiss each other adoringly as their naked bodies mold themselves to one another as they intertwine their legs together—taking care not to jostle Keith’s still healing lower right leg.  “Oh Keith, making love with you is so beautiful.”

Keith:  “You are so beautiful and sweet and loving and sexy, Lily my love.”     He growls suggestively as he nuzzles her neck.

Lily:  And Lily feels beautiful with her Keith.  “And Keith, you are so handsome and caring and kind and loving.”

Keith:  Then Keith startles Lily by rolling them such that he is now lying on his back and Lily is laying on top of him.  “Now I’ve got you.”  He says kissing her adoringly.

Lily:  “Oh Keith, are you alright with me on top of you?”   She worries about her weight.

Keith:  “Hmmm.  Now that’s a loaded question.”  He smiles mischievously.  “I like a girl on top.”   And Keith kisses Lily even more lustfully.  “Just be sure not to touch my healing leg, and we’ll be good.

Lily:  “Oh I’m sorry, was I touching it?”   She asks worriedly.

Keith:  “Wrong leg, Lily Darling.”   Keith raises his eyebrows up and down suggestively and Lily blushes.  Then, Keith pulls Lily’s torso up toward his face and Keith kisses her loveliness adoringly.  Lily’s full round breasts are beautifully natural and soft and womanly curvy–no hard silicone here.   “Oh, Lily my love!”   Keith says as he kisses one breast and caresses the other while Lily holds herself up with her hands on either side of Keith’s head.

Lily:  “Ohh!”   Lily sighs.  Then looking down at Keith, Lily kisses his forehead and she asks him breathlessly as she feels his arousal growing again  between her legs again.  “Keith my love!  Are you?  Are we?”   She asks in wonderment since they just made love not quite forty minutes ago.

Keith:  Keith’s left hand caresses Lily’s round backsides as he continues to kiss her left breast and caress her right breast.  “Yes!”  He growls deeply and suggestively.  Then he asks in love and concern for her being recently deflowered, by him.   “That is Lily, if you’re not in too much pain from our earlier lovemaking?”  He asks hopefully [(3) right].

Lily:   Lily nearly melts under Keith’s lovingly smouldering gaze.  She smiles and shakes her head.  Then remembering Keith is blind, she says shyly.    “No Keith, I’m not in any pain.  But with your healing leg, are you in pain?”

Keith:  “Well, if you stay on top, I think we’ll be just fine.  Like I said, I like a girl on top.”   He growls suggestively.

Lily:  But Lily feels shy because she knows that she’ll be exposed sitting atop Keith making love.   “But, Keith, I’ve never … “

Keith:  “Lily Darling, I’ll guide you.  You’ll find that you like being on top when we make love.  Trust me!”    He raises his eyebrows up and down.  Then he says cheekily.   “And remember, if you’re shy, I’m blind!”    They both laugh joyously.  Then Keith returns to being seductive and he says.  “Although, lovers see by feel and I’ve already seen all of you, my Darling Lily.”   Then Keith kisses Lily adoringly as she lays back down on his chest as they embrace.

Lily:  “Huhh!”   Lily gasps in recognition of her own feelings earlier.   “Oh Keith my love.”   Lily has gone from a lonely unloved virgin to being engaged and very much loved—in every way—in four short weeks.  “Make love with me.”

Keith:  “I don’t think you could hold me back at this point, Lily Darling.  But, I do need to put on another condom.  I mean, we both want kids, but we want to plan them.  Right?”   He asks pulling the condom package from underneath his pillow where he had secreted it.

Lily:  “Yes.”   She nods shyly lying nestled into Keith’s neck and chest—as much as a naked woman lying on top of her naked lover can be shy.

Keith:  “Alright, now sit up and then sit back on my thighs a bit.  You won’t hurt my healing lower leg.”   Lily does so, demurely covering and supporting her full round breasts with her arms in front of her.  Keith opens the condom package and he starts to put it on himself.   And then Keith stops putting on the condom, and with a seductive smile he offers it to Lily. “Lily Darling, would you like to finish rolling the condom on me?”

Lily:  Lily’s eyes widen as she contemplates what he is asking.  This weekend is full of more new sensual experiences than Lily could have ever thought possible—even if she were on her honeymoon, which, technically, she is, Lily supposes.  “Yes.”   She says shyly.

Keith:  “Now Lily Darling, raise your hips over me and then slowly sit on top of me as we join our bodies together again.”

Lily:  Lily does this.  And Keith is right.  Lily can feel more pleasures with her being on top.  “Oh Keith my love!”   She gasps.

Keith:  “That’s right.  Now, I’ll sit up a little bit so I can reach you to kiss you as we mold our bodies together again, and again, and again, and again.  Hmmm. “  Keith moans in pleasure as their bodies move together.  “Lily Darling, I love you so!”

Lily:  Lost in the whirl of pleasurable sensations as their bodies move in perfect harmony, all Lily can say is.   “Oh,  Keith!”

Keith kisses and caresses Lily’s lips, and neck and breasts as their bodies move together again, and again, and again, and again for several minutes.  And then, their bodies surge with waves of pleasure as they tremble with blissful ecstasy.  As each of them strains with joy with the pleasures they have given to and shared with each other, Lily collapses and lays back down on top of Keith and they kiss and cuddle each other adoringly.  Then, they shift their bodies to their sides and kiss and cuddle some more before falling into a deep sleep.

To be continued with Chapter 21 


(1) The “Seeing Beauty” story logo is a composite of:
a)    Image representing Keith Erickson is that of British actor Richard Armitage as Lucas North in the BBC’s Spooks (2008 – 2010), series 8 promo, pix 15 was found at http://www.richardarmitagenet.com/images/gallery/Spooks/spookspromo/album/slides/series8-15.html

b)  Image representing Lily Sherman is that of American actress Mandy Moore and was found at http://images.fanpop.com/images/image_uploads/Mandy-Moore-mandy-moore-661788_1024_768.jpg ;  NB:  I chose Ms. Moore to represent this character not because she is fat or chubby–far from it–but because she has a fresh faced innocence and sincerity that reflects the goodness of this character.  Any pre weight loss Lily images could be handled with makeup and costuming.


(2) Keith kissing Lily image is Richard Armitage portraying lucas north in Spooks, episode 5, pix 268 was found at   http://www.richardarmitagenet.com/images/gallery/Spooks/spooks8/album/Episode5/slides/ep5_268.html

(3) Keith image is Richard Armitage portraying Lucas North in Spooks, series 8, episode 5, pix 253 was found at http://www.richardarmitagenet.com/images/gallery/Spooks/spooks8/album/Episode5/slides/ep5_253.html

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Ch. 19:  https://gratianads90.wordpress.com/2012/09/17/seeing-beauty-ch-19-keith-and-lily-continue-to-enjoy-their-sunday-together-91712-gratiana-lovelace-post-272/


About Gratiana Lovelace

Gratiana Lovelace is my nom de plume for my creative writing and blogging. I write romantic stories in different sub genres. The stories just tumble out of me. My resurgence in creative writing occurred when I viewed the BBC miniseries of Elizabeth Gaskell's novel North & South in February 2010. The exquisitely talented British actor portraying the male lead John Thornton in North & South--Richard Crispin Armitage--became my unofficial muse. I have written over 50 script stories about love--some are fan fiction, but most are original stories--that I am just beginning to share with others on private writer sites, and here on my blog. And as you know, my blog here is also relatively new--since August 2011. But, I'm having fun and I hope you enjoy reading my blog essays and my stories. Cheers! Grati ;-> upd 12/18/11
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7 Responses to “Seeing Beauty”, Ch. 20–Keith and Lily Make Love (R rated), 9/21/12 Gratiana Lovelace (Post #275)

  1. AJ Daisy says:

    Oh Grati Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful I’m blown away. Thank You


  2. Dear Readers,
    I realized belatedly this morning that in my fatigue in making final edits and such last night, that I didn’t “tame down” the love scene for publication here too much.

    So its R rating is probably appropriate, when usually I’m more of a PG-13, use your imaginations gal. Ha!

    But I guess that you have figured out by now that I am a passionate person–sheltered within my ladylike prim exterior. Hence my use of a nom de plume. Ha!
    Cheers! Grati ;->


  3. Fabi says:

    I’m glad you didn’t tame down the love scene, it’s sensuously beautiful just the way you posted it.
    Have a nice weekend!


    • Hi Fabi,
      Thanks for your very nice note! You are too kind about my writing–and this love scene as written in particular.
      My goal is always to convey the loving tenderness between the lovers in my stories–being true to their hearts and respectful of their love.
      Cheers! Grati ;->
      P.S. And oh yeah, I’m the responsible sexual relationship issues author, too. Ha!


  4. Pingback: “Seeing Beauty”, Ch. 21: Lily and Keith Plan their Lives Together after Making Love, 9/24/12 Gratiana Lovelace (Post #277) | Something About Love (A)

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